All Comments on 'Transformations - Witnesses Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Oh brother.

How boring do you have to be to ruin sex?

wayneandanntriskelionwayneandanntriskelionover 6 years agoAuthor
ROFL

Different strokes, man. Some of us like a slow burn.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

i think it is interesting. i am intrigued to see it grow. it might not be the best for wanking off immediately but it’s is a good slow story(which i perfer).

wayneandanntriskelionwayneandanntriskelionover 6 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

Slow burn is our mojo :)

LynchjimLynchjimover 2 years ago

I’m really starting to enjoy this I hope in starting at the right story so I can read them all in chronological order holy shit I used a big word I never though I’d use lol thanks chap please tell me if I’m not reading the first story in this universe thanks wayneanddanntriskelion.

DreaMajorDreaMajor9 months ago

A good story, generally well written. One grammatical comment: “Her and Jessica servicing long lines of men and women alike, covered in girl juice and cum.”

It should be, “She and Jessica….” Try dropping, “and Jessica“ and see how it sounds.

wayneandanntriskelionwayneandanntriskelion9 months agoAuthor

@DreaMajor, good catch.

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Wayne and Ann Triskelion are a married couple in a BDSM relationship who write erotic novels and short stories. Our work spans several different kinks including erotic horror, BDSM, mind control, and bimbification. Send us email if you like: wayneandanntriskelion at gmail. Als...