All Comments on 'Transforming Genevieve Ch. 06'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Her depravity

is sinking in to the cesspool of life - just where she belongs.

Please can you stop over using the word 'BABE' in you stories - it shows a complete lack of thought or imagination - using names would be a good start.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
gripping plot

This chapter presents a startling departure in the transformation of Genevieve, and would seem to be leading the reader away from a romantic story to mere erotic crudity. Such, however, is not the case, but instead leads, as the author indicates in the epilog, into something darker in the near future. Dramatic storytelling at its best.

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To my loyal followers, I’ve had some health issues for the last six months. But I’m feeling much better now and I am again working on my stories. Look for new chapters of Transforming Genevieve, Diary of a High Price Escort, and High Rise Exhibitionist Gen Angel and the lad...