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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I liked the riot angle . It’s current with what us Americans think our politicians did to get Trump out of office! Biden paid Americans shut up money as relief. They even tried to hang a boy for protecting his own! Americans are buying ammo like never before!

krazydudekrazydudeover 2 years ago

I felt that this could easily have been a 2 or 3 part story. More interaction and dialogues pointing to humiliation and debauchery could have been explored. This feels like a Reader's Digest version of a much longer story, which has been cut to achieve a certain size.

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