All Comments on 'Trapped Pt. 01'

Fuucckk I'm wet now 😍 please keep writing this story!

none of the phony 'girl really likes it'

Keep writing to see where the story is going. You should try to give a hint though as to what is to be expected. Switch to third person narration. First person narration is more implausible and limits knowing thoughts for all the participants and emotional reactions.

Sir is a polite term that in modern usage does not mean Master, which is a title , not a regular name. Please keep that in mind Sir is a politely term,just that. It is not the same as Sir. Keep writing!

More, please.

It's difficult to read a story when you have to continually re-read to figure out what the author actually meant to write or convey. Basically good content, but always proofread before publication.

IT HAS BEEN 3 DAYS!! WHERE IS THE NEXT INSTALLMENT?!?

I rarely explore Non-Con, and I only categorized my series as such because of the sake of others, even though I would still consider it as more closely related to BDSM, however I read this story and loved it, and I have voted 5 stars for a job well done! Although it is still rape, (this is not a complaint at all, you gave a warning and properly placed it in this genre) I enjoyed this story immensely, and am excited to hear more from you!!

This story is completely different than Caged (which for some bizarre reason is only showing ch1 on your main menu?). This comes across as current contemporary making this illegal slavery/ human trafficking and to me it’s not sexy.

I’d suggest that you bear in mind that this isn’t a BDSM story, he isn’t a Dom and she isn’t a sub even if she has to show some submissive behaviour. She is a victim and he’s a fucking psychopath who has kidnapped, abused and raped her. It’s like comparing “rape fantasy” to fantasy rape” the first is a normal kink the second is a story about someone being raped. As such I don’t find rape sexy.

Tess (UK)

Ok so as soon as I finished caged which I LOVED by the way I had to read what else you had. Your an excellent writer and I really really hope you continue with BOTH stories soon!!

I just finished reading caged and this story. And I'm in love with the way you tell them. I'm looking forward to the next ones!

Should be in BDSM. Boring and predictable :(

It isn't BDSM as she does not agree to it there for it is non-con. BDSM has an agreement with both parties of what happens. In the story I created there is only one character that has a choice. I do plan to write some BDSM but I want these two stories done first

are you going to finish the story??

When Kate was thrusting her fingers inside the slave's pussy, she didn't break the slave's hymen? And when Clay was fingering the slave in the shower and in the bed, her hymen didn't break either? Then her virginity was taken away in the bed? Ok, we could need a little background on why the slave is where she is. Or did I miss that part?

Like the Caged series, this storyline is similiar and like the way that master can be hard and soft. It messes with her mind of kindness with harsh punishment. I am surprised that slave did not find her rape without a lot more pain. Afterall she was beaten with a belt on her pussy in the shower before her rape. What about the mistress? Would love to see Kate take her punishment and have slave watch. Did slave get her arms released before letting her sleep? Uncomfortable to sleep with your arms stretched above your head. More please.

Clandestine Modern Day slavery is almost an automatic fail for me. I have yet to read a story with that setting where the author convincing builds a system where slaves can not kill their masters and escape.

More please

Reduction to Slavery

Depersonalization and loss of autonomy are essential to accompany the fear and force necessary to enslavement.

Secretly love it. It's quite intense, would love to read more.