All Comments on 'Travel Volleyball Fun'

exhibited very good use of detail, well written and believeable

GREAT STORY. WILL READ YOUR OTHERS NEXT TIME. AFTER LOOKING AT YOUR PROFILE PIC, YOU WOULD BLESS US ALL ILLUSTRATED EXHIBITIONIST STORY IN THE FUTURE!

Well done.

Thank You

I enjoyed the "danger" elements in your writing. Something a bit different. It would be nice to get a bit more personality in the charachters and perhaps something from the imagination more than memory. Keep them coming please. D

Love the exhibitionism in a semi-public (should I say pubic?) situation. As an older man I'd love to have a sexy young woman show off for me.

Very Hot!

This story came out on my 30th birthday

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Wow indeed! Great story. The pacing and tease factors were excellent. You paint a very realistic picture with all of your stuff. It's almost like I'm personally experiencing it. I want to read more!

A bit hard to believe that any woman would enjoy this though. You've probably guessed that I'm a classic smelly old coot...true but I'm not dead yet.

dang, that was so hot. great descriptive writing. 5 stars

I hope we get to hear about the rest of the trip!