All Comments on 'Travelers'

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KansasKansasover 18 years ago
Very hot and seductive little story!

I love stories with believeable situations leading to girl/girl sexual encounters, and this one certainly succeeds! The thought of an older woman picking up a frightened younger girl left all alone at a gas station, and then slowly seducing her that night in a motel room is surprisingly erotic! Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
I agree entirely with the comment below

This was a beautifully crafted story, and well-written in good English, but these are attributes which extend the pleasure of the story itself - warm, sympathetic, sometimes tear-jerking, always entertaining, never predictable, and a joy to read. Thank you. Freddy, Brazil

hirojinbrodiehirojinbrodiealmost 2 years ago

That may be the most intense story I've ever read. Simply mesmerizing. I hope there I'd a part 2. They are so cute together.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Awesome!

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