by Rob in AZ
Glad you are writing again, have just read both of your new chapters and, YEP, You are definitely the best, TRISH is SOOOO HOOTT, especially, when she is with you. Your sister is SOO Hoott too, can't wait for the Honeymoon chapters to be finished and this trip as well. Then I can hardly wait for your sister and her children coming to your house and getting to know Trish and the girls.
Can't wait for the continuation, including everyones visit to Sedona. Please hurry.
...a conjunction between 2 nouns! It's way too short!