All Comments on 'Treality Stories Vol. 03 Pt. 02'

Hey Rocket Man,

It took me a bit to see what you were trying to do.

I liked the pace and get it. The purests will be driven nutz. Very brave.

Keep writing as I love many of your really novel stories and ideas as opposed to some of the formula stuff on such sites.

Stay true Bro'.

Hey 'Fellow Bro',

I am sure the true purists will have a field day, but I am happy with Sparkling Red's and my first effort at this style of writing enough to have another go … Make them suffer some more!

Hope you like the concept and outcome of that one too. We trust you're Rating them too. Hint, hint ...

Cheers

Rocket Man

Yes it does, more RFN please!

Great to hear. We shall see what we can do for you Anonymous RFN One …

Lots more to come … so to speak ...

We try to make sure context and the flow still works so we have to re work what is usually results from a fevered interchange between Sparkling Red and I and we are yet to find out how to put my text in italics to make it easier for readers which is how Sparkling Red and I delineate when we transfer our texts into word! Lol

Perhaps you can sign off your Anonymous posts with RFN so we know it's you … Lol

We hope you're commenting and rating our other stories. What did you think of Vol I Pt 13 as it's my lowest scoring Story so far and Sparkling Red wasn't involved as she that it was too personal for me. It was my most traumatic one to write and not sure I got the Category right either. Life is not fair at all as I am not sure that Little Dickie got his just deserts as my Ex was certainly not the only one!