by Kitslit
the title says it all. Your previous story and this one were great until you introduced the gay element, thus ruining it for straight males.
To the guy in the previous review...
What are you talking about? Are you some kind of homophobe? So what if guys do guys? That didn't ruin it for this straight guy; it made me wonder what it would be like! Isn't that what exploring our sexual nature is all about?
Sure, you can speak for yourself, but as far as I'm concerned, you sound just like "Steve", the character in the story. You both deserve the same fate!
Thanks, Kitslit for a great, high voltage sex-fest!
great story, loved the gay content as much as the rest. It all fit together so well. Nice to see an "Awakening" that isn't set up by some power figure too.
The story was well structured, wonderfully written, incredibly sexy, with a very touching loving tone. Absolutely fantastic tale.
Well, on rare occasions you can get both in one package.