All Comments on 'Trespassing Track Star'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

That's a great start to a story. Is there going to be a chapter 2?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Promising start!

Odd last line, though... what "agreed upon safe word"?

GashlasherGashlasherover 1 year ago

Very good. And a nice wee twist!

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