All Comments on 'Triad Patrol - Pilot'

Part 2 please

I love it. I can't wait to see more chapters down the road. There is many storylines possible with pilot.

Hey, Salamando — You've written quite a few superhero stories, but in many ways I think this is your most successful. You've introduced a force for good into the Sex Mage World — more powerful than an orgasm block, faster than a boyboard, able to stiffen tall cocks with a single thought! And she knows, without saying so, that with great power comes great responsibility. Tormenting a helpless male, even torturing him, is perfectly acceptable, but there are limits, and consequences for going beyond them. It adds just a touch of balance to the otherwise unstoppable power of an awakened mage. Fun stuff. I look forward to more.

As always, a first rate story that I could never write!

Really good story!