All Comments on 'Trials of a Woman Police Constable'

by brendachaplin2000

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PsiberdreamingPsiberdreamingalmost 2 years ago

Absolutely would love to see where this story goes.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Definitely love to see what happens

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

agreed would like it continued

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Well written but if you’re not prepared to finish it, why start? Have confidence to prepare and write a complete story.

billdaviesbilldaviesalmost 2 years ago

Excellent story, convincingly told. Yes, please keep it going!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Great foundation. Love to see more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I loved the start of this story: vivid descriptions and interesting characters. Please continue!

GortmundyGortmundyalmost 2 years ago

Only just started reading it and I gotta comment already. Looks good, but there are no 2 year vets (they're still sprogs), the youngest you can join the cops is 18 and a half (you used to be able to join the cadets at 17 I think but I dont know if the cadets are even a thing anymore) but the most egregious thing I read is this. No cop who works the street EVER says he/she hopes for a "quiet" shift out loud. It's the kiss of death and any cop near them would groan and smack them upside the head for the horrible shit that was gonna rain down upon them because some idiot tempted fate. Looking forward to reading the rest though.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Great start. Would like to see where this goes.

dvmrdvmralmost 2 years ago

Please continue. Great start.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Great sart , although you have left a little early with your ending. Expect to see more action in that you have described a woman with some exceptional martial arts skills. It is your story and somewhere in this is going to be a good ending and perhaps the bad guys will meet a similar fate to Steve.

CityWolfCityWolfalmost 2 years ago

Please continue. Being a sick fuck, I am hoping that it just keeps getting worse for our protagonist and there is no escape or white knight.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Well, yes, please continue. What is left of the auction? What happens after Sarah is sold before she is lead away to meet her new master/mistress? What adventures (lol) will Sarah have to endure before she finally gets her freedom? I always wish for a good ending when the victim is innocent whereas if the victim is a real bitch to others, I am ok with having a lot of things happen to the victim. Either she learns how to treat others well or she ends up a broken slave. Steve certainly did not deserve to die in such a horrible way so I hope some payback will come to Sarah to inflict on the slavers. Or maybe there is a good ending with Sarah being treated well and she really does learn to love her master/mistress?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Enthralling

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I will wait for next part

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I've read enough stories where the main characters give up or it's just one ghastly act after another. Have her take her own virginity or fuck or fight her way out of it, but please give her some real fight.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

shit

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

YES! Very good...shoot her up and make her happy!!! Please continue!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Great start! Looking forward to the next part. I hope the buyers ask some questions about her and she sells herself the way they would want her to.

Hman79Hman79almost 2 years ago

Let's see her kick some ass!

EroticApeEroticApealmost 2 years ago

Good start! Looking forward to seeing how it continues!

bambla19bambla19almost 2 years ago

amazing can’t wait to read more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Very nice, would like to read more about where these girls end up...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I liked the story so far. Please continue,

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Plz continue.Would also like to know the fate of lt kate.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This is a great start. Please do continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Yes great story - look forward to updates

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Fantastic start! Hope to read more soon!

SaraHushSaraHushover 1 year ago

It's a great story, i love the pacing and the plot. Please continue.

ambiseambiseover 1 year ago

Excellent storyline

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I like this very much, and look forward for more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I really like this story, and I would very much want you to continue the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

well written

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

More please

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

More and see if she escapes

AnonymousAnonymous21 days ago

Brilliant

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