All Comments on 'Triangles Ch. 01'

by TracyKaber

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joestuddjoestuddalmost 15 years ago
missing college

i liked it. hope you don't make it too much of a psycho roommate story, more of a bi/group thing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
VERY erotic. Loved the roommate's seduction scheme

I hope the boyfriend of her roommate tries to resist her even more and that she continues to lure him with hot, irresistible seduction. Maybe she can eventually steal him away from his gf.

Also, sounds like this girl is a real bad-ass...maybe she also puts her skills to good use on reluctant professors?

Keep up the great work...can't wait for ch.02!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Well done

Great use of tension to keep the reader on edge. Would he fuck her, would Katie catch him. Your storytelling made the eventual sexual coupling even hotter.

WarfolomeiWarfolomeiover 9 years ago
Nice !

Weird that Katie didn't tell him about the trip. Otherwise a steamy read !

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Sequel?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
WHAT A DEVIOUS, DECEPTIVE, MANIPULATIVE BITCH

She made an interesting, humorous story.

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schoolmrsschoolmrsover 1 year ago

Nice story, that took me back to my college days. I was pretty bad. I used get soaked quickly with a succession of boys. Good to be reminded of it again.

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