All Comments on 'Tribbing Straight Girls Ch. 01'

by Happytobehere123

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

If this is the begining of a wonderful tale and written very well. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Completely and thoroughly hot!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Nice build-up. Good characterization for the best kind of Princess Charming. Please keep going.

NovaronNovaronover 2 years ago

Can't wait to read about her and Monica at last. Very hot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

As a first story - brilliant!

A few errors though, eg. 5th last line:- "I'm really glad (to) you could come". Did you do a final read through after you'd finished editing? This often helps get rid of 'leftover' words. And in various places you've used "come", whereas the generally accepted spelling is cum.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Even the historical aside was hot. I can hardly wait for the main story!

Bluebathrobe69Bluebathrobe69over 2 years ago

I like it....please write more❤

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Definitely want to see this continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This story was bomb

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This story is great. Love the theme. One of the best I've read in a while.Please continue.

Dolly2Dolly2over 2 years ago

Great first story. Hope you write some more

CharmlesCharmlesover 2 years ago

Really, really, really good! Please continue... soon!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Love this story... you should *definitely* continue

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

super niech w 2 historii łechtaczkka wjdxie w kaptur 2 łechtaczki

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Love the start...give us a better description of the players please. Take your time with it, don't rush. Build your story and let it flow off your fingers! Great job!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I love everything, from the descriptions of their clits, to the maintained eye contact while orgasming. You have a way with words for sure. Please continue. Monica is a lucky girl.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

please continue! there’s rarely any dedicated tribbing stories like this and i’d love to see the main character get it on with multiple girls.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Continue? Uhmm, yes please!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I thought your story was well written and I can see that this could continue for several more stories, At least I hope you do that.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

really enjoyed it, keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Society? Prince Charming? Beating something?

Enough with the man bashing and just trib.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

pls continue this

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Yes pls continue this

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

updating?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

any chance at an update?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Pls continue!!

MaezedMaezedover 1 year ago

I am dying here waiting for the next chapter…..

SilvermireSilvermireover 1 year ago

Continue, continue !!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

can we get an update?

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

My clit is trobbing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

more please

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Drops a banger of a F/F story, leaves, refuses to elaborate further.

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