by Happytobehere123
Nice build-up. Good characterization for the best kind of Princess Charming. Please keep going.
As a first story - brilliant!
A few errors though, eg. 5th last line:- "I'm really glad (to) you could come". Did you do a final read through after you'd finished editing? This often helps get rid of 'leftover' words. And in various places you've used "come", whereas the generally accepted spelling is cum.
This story is great. Love the theme. One of the best I've read in a while.Please continue.
Love the start...give us a better description of the players please. Take your time with it, don't rush. Build your story and let it flow off your fingers! Great job!
I love everything, from the descriptions of their clits, to the maintained eye contact while orgasming. You have a way with words for sure. Please continue. Monica is a lucky girl.
please continue! there’s rarely any dedicated tribbing stories like this and i’d love to see the main character get it on with multiple girls.
I thought your story was well written and I can see that this could continue for several more stories, At least I hope you do that.
Society? Prince Charming? Beating something?
Enough with the man bashing and just trib.