All Comments on 'Tricked by my Mother-in-law Ch. 01'

What story?

STUPID

No story here.

Yeah, what story...........

The writing is mostly good, couple of typos.

Story had a jump in it, but I carried on.

We know that about a bottle of wine will loosen mil enough to shed her dress in front of sil . . . Or does it really taken that much wine ? ? ?

Still wonder what the mil looks like. Hmmm.

Carry on and the ratings, hopefully, improve.

So, wifey is screwing her eyes out at the business meeting, right?

Nice tale, too short, wrong tense and juvenile ending. You think we're stupid and can't find the end of your tale? a four becomes a one.

Well, I guess this is going somewhere? A bit too short to start but hoping to lead to a lot more.

The prologue of a prologue that's the vibes of it. There's little to no point in this manner of separating chapters so you might as well publish something that's autoconclusive or have readers not come back

Apologize for the chapter break. I didn’t realize it takes this long for them to approve a new chapter. Hope that will prove satisfactory.