All Comments on 'Trigger-Happy Girl Hunt Ch. 04'

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TSreaderTSreaderover 3 years ago
Another very yummy chapter

Very yummy indeed. I'm really looking forward to more of this story. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Character Descriptions

I like the story so far, but could go in more on the descriptions of the characters like Jenny, it helps give the story visuals if we can imagine what the characters look like, such eyes color, race, hair color, etc.

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