All Comments on 'Trinx Ch. 01'

OK. You've hooked me. Please don't let me down. Keep the pace and develop the character(s), but don't try to turn it into War and Peace.

Hoping you can keep going at this level. I'll certainly be watching/waiting for more.

I wanted to thank the pair who commented here, and all of those that have voted! Also, the second chapter is now out, and this time the segments are properly separated. I hope all of you stay with it, and please let me know what you think :)

you've got me spinning trying to see all the possible outcomes from this and I love to be confounded - so rare these days - good work!