All Comments on 'Triplet Play Ch. 02 - A New Routine'

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SemperSolus0198SemperSolus0198almost 2 years ago

Was hoping you continued this story line and hoping still you continue it further, well done!

dikupinyadikupinyaalmost 2 years ago
more

but please dont add more players

cursrahcursrahover 1 year ago

more of this story please

P_DoggP_Dogg8 months ago

Hopefully there will eventually be another chapter

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Ending a bit weak. Sort of just stopped - hit a stop sign? Seemed liked it was missing something. Daughters cleaning off her face? Planning for the future? Just felt incomplete.

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My stories and characters are fiction. I wish I could have done all this stuff. The reviews from Anonymous, on the first few, nearly drove me away. Fortunately, some seasoned writers stepped up and warned me to take comments like those with a grain of salt. It helped. I read...