All Comments on 'Tripod'

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JBEdwardsJBEdwardsover 1 year ago

I love the sentence, "My father taught me how to throw a punch and where to aim. Apparently, he should have taught me how to connect." I suspect it describes many fathers when teaching self-defense to their daughters. She needs to find new friends to hang out with! 5* ~~JB

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Ended a bit too soon. Will she meet her friends, will she return to tripod for another session or even several more, possibly in exchange for some jewelry?

Anyway, a nice short one

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Not up to your usual standards.

liz33ndliz33ndover 1 year ago

this was interesting, three stars for a great short story

imadronG0imadronG05 months ago

that was a fun read 5 stars

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