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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Excellent story I really enjoyed it.

ShadowRosieShadowRosiealmost 4 years ago

You need an editor for your spelling and grammar. You also need to read your story through because you leave scenes out that should be there. You promised a butt plug as a punishment then never mentioned it again. There should be a more fair sectioning of responsibilities. They are both adults in the real world. Age and DDlb play has to sometimes pause for reality checks.

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