by cruel_mirror
Is English not your primary language? It’s pretty amazing that people who don’t have a firm grasp of the language can attempt to write a story. The result is hard to read, but kudos for trying.
Colossal waste of time. I'm not sure whether you couldn't really express what you were feeling or if I didn't "get it". In any event, this made no sense and wasn't entertaining. Your other work is quite decent. 2** barely.
"Really, really bad."
Wow! 1.73 avg score!
You have to accept that I'm improving my skills, right?
"I'm not sure whether you couldn't really express what you were feeling or if I didn't "get it". In any event, this made no sense and wasn't entertaining"
Sorry, I almost missed that sincere comment among the copy/paste garbage.
I'm not saying you don't get it but I frankly do not understand what is there to get.
There's only one and a half background story in the flow of the events. Maybe you're right, I couldn't express what I see clearly. Or, the story is not interesting. But it is interesting to my taste.
Thanks for the comment
Maybe kudu's for the (man?) hours spent/wasted on this one. After all, time is such a precious thing!
Missed the point (which one?)
Try again PLEASE. Maybe humor and satire cat. where this should belong??
"Is English not your primary language? It’s pretty amazing that people who don’t have a firm grasp of the language can attempt to write a story. The result is hard to read, but kudos for trying."
Thanks for the kudos.
I'm curious though, why do you still keep reading all my stories?
I'll post another one soon. Don't forget to write this exact comment once again.
Kudos for trying what you're trying to do.
i liked it, it grabbed my attention, and trust me my adhd makes getting my attention hard lol. great job.
@cybertron84:
Thanks, and best wishes about the adhd.
But if you could concentrate on my writing (where most people complain), I think you're managing it well!