by wallcleaner
Because there are no normal size cocks in the tropics. Only big black ones. How stupid. 1*
The second chapter in this dreamy romance story is a superior reading experience. Hopefully this is not the last chapter in this wonderful story.
More of the usual racist stuff, and the apparently required 'BBC' mythology.
There aren't enough stars to give to your great writing and story in both chapters, nor enough BRAVOS, but know as a fellow writer, not here but in novels, I am truly impressed by your talent. JEF P.S - Too bad you could not have Eli come to visit her at her home, and become her lover, never returning to the place they met except on joint trips together to go there to remember and relive that first time all over again.
Can hardly wait for you to get over this racism and BBC mythology phase and back to real erotic writing.
Drop the mythology and racist lies about nonexistent BBC and the effect it has on otherwise sentient women of other races. You don't need that to write a compelling story, you've proven that in other stories, without this bullshit.