All Comments on 'Trouble in Town Pt. 02'

Keep writing more chapters. Very unique story idea.

Here is feedback. Great read. Interesting characters. Good pacing. Sad about mother dying. Would have loved to read more about her and Ares.

I love the detail and the characters good chapter can't wait for the next chapter

Very interesting characters and story line. I look forward to seeing where you take this. I look forward to seeing how Ares handles finding out he's a father.

You definitely need to continue this story. Really like the intrigue and angst. Keep it up!

This is a good story so far!!! Keep going!

U really have to continue. I have been waiting for this. But quick one is this story linked with Poseidon

Please continue, you've got a great storyline so far and interesting characters.

I would definitely like this to continue. Sorry that the mom died but understand how that would mold his childhood, not having her to balance out the uncle. Thanks for your efforts.

Keep it fucking coming. Great story so far. Truly hope you keep it going.

You got to keep the story going. You caught my interest and I am looking forward to the rest of the story.

Definitely definitely definitely continue! Very interesting start. I'm intrigued and looking forward to more

Enjoyed the chapter definitely thought you would not bring Ares back into the game so soon ,but still anxious to see where this story goes.

I loved reading this! I just love Greek mythology and I love the way you've characterised ares, Alonso and Victoria. I can't wait to read the upcoming chapters!

I enjoyed it immensely. Would like to see if Ares takes mayhem over his blood.

Do not stop! We need more, I’m sure I speak for everyone that read TiT pt. 2. I need to know what happens in all the story lines. So that’s about 3-4 more chapters 😂 👍🏾

Hey, you need to continue the story I'm eagerly waiting part 3 and further continuation. While I'm at it what's going on with A Were Story?

Feedback where is part 3 😂

The story needs to continue!!!

Bitch!! I could srangle you!!!

First,you got me all hot and bothered with confrontations,posieden and a were story--and never finished them!!(well,i was hoping for a jonas and amy tale from confrontations) then you come on the scene with THIS,and just leave it uo in the air!?! How could you DO this to me?!? Please come back!! Your works are appreciated!! Hope all is well with you!!

I just found your stories thos week. If it were up to me, please continue. A most sigular plot line and i love the characters. Please continue. I am about to read chap. 3. Thank you.