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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Escalates a bit too far

Enthusiastic whores definitely need to be used and abused. The flip side of the dynamic (if it is to kept positive) is that they need to be cared for. Thank you for creating a greedy girl, but I hope for a bit balance in your future work. To me, the goal is for the game to continue.

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