All Comments on 'True Desire: Gail's Awakening'

The story starts with old worn-out stereotyped banality of two women discussing cock-size, as if that is something that actually occurs in real life, and then continues with more trite nothings. I appreciate that authors take the time to write and share their writing with us readers, but we readers invest time in reading, and it would be good for authors to actually consider what they submit.

Size queen, load of cliche bullshit.

Scores 1/5

so now Walter can divorce the whore and get on with his life without a slut for a or you a man hater that is going to cuck the poor bastard

Still a no from me.

Goodbye Gail, No need to tell us about the divorce.

Chapter 2 please!

Just more of the stupid slut with a husband from the 3W club who needs tweezers to jack off with.

Sorry you get a "P" for pathetic.

5* story till I got to the end (unless there is a part 2). 4*

I appreciate you taking the time to read and at least offer a semi-coherent opinion. I'm not sure how you can assert women don't talk cock size - I've been married twice and have had about 15 girlfriends and all have told me cock size is a topic amongst the ladies in a number of circumstances. I guess you are mistaking Literotica for the Nobel Prize in Literature rather than amateurs attempting to entertain others. I'll stick with the opinions of my 65 followers and overall positive high ratings to assess my efforts, thanks. Meanwhile, I anxiously await your first submission so I can evaluate with the same standard (pretty sure I'll be waiting awhile!!!!!)/

Great story line. Just don’t do the typical and predictable part 2. Think outside the box. Why does she have to tell Walter right away? Let her be reluctant to give up the pussy but then can’t control it. Just not the - go tell her husband and he likes it.

Re: Starstruck & Someoneorother comments

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May I suggest that cock size to women is much the same as boob size to men. It's a curiosity, and thus a topic for discussion, even erotic fantasy.

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But it's not a factor in choice of sexual partner, or if it is, just an extension of curiosity.

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As I have commented many times before, it's the skill of the conductor, not the size of the baton that creates beautiful music. It's the illusory ability of the magician, not the size of the wand that creates wonderful magic.

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Lue

One can only hope that sluts who act like your protagonist will become infected with HIV and suffer a slow and painful death! And authors who have to defend their stories with statements should remember that the opinion of the reader is individual and does not require any explanation!

Unsure why all the negativity, I really enjoyed the story. “Placing her left hand, so her wedding ring can be seen” did it for me. Thank you and hurry with pt 2 please.

Failure noted!

Still a good read. Thanks for sharing.

Next time sounds like a good addition to this one. I look forward to it.

Thanks for sharing.

Haha the loyalty of a cunt.

In part 2 turn her into a wanting slut, with 38D’s and Walter wanting to be cuckold she can shed her shy image and become the hungry slut they both want to see.