by NewSlowBurnStories
I’m confused. Tom and Milena have a visible, passionate love but Susan wants Mikena to have a more passionate love with a black stranger?
Which is it?
Not saying Milena and Tim's love is a bit sugary, but is NewSlowBurn a pen name for Tate and Lyle?
Susan just wants the best for her friend, or is that to despoil her, so she can go hunting with an out-and-out cock hound like herself.
Best bit, the parts are shorter than Choppedliver's Heroine Addiction, which might cause me to sample the product of a similar name.
That bitch Susan should keep her opinions to her fucking self why does she want to ruin her friend's life.
WAY too slow, and what does Susan care about Milena's "excitement" as long as she's happy? What if Susan's "excitement" destroys her happimess?
Sickeningly sweet, too sickening, we GET IT! They love each other, we don't NEED to be constantly told with flowery, sugary lanuage, we're NOT reading Mills & Boon novels here.
Excruciatingly slow. Tim needs to get a gun with two silver bullets, one for Marcus and (more importantly) one for Susan. Witches like Susan should pay!