All Comments on 'Trust Ch. 03'

I enjoyed the forst chapters of your story, but wonder if you intend to finish it.

Thanks, Bob

Now where is the rest of it?

guess there's a folluw-up coming ?

I think its about time you got this guy walking so he can get to killing. Next chapter please.

Now please, where is the next chapter? You can't just lave all your fans hanging this way!!!

CarCam

Speaking of trust, isn't it ironic? Readers read a beginning then following with what is assumed to be a middle, all this time trusting that the author has already finished the story... You can't be serious! Writing three chapters, then leaving the story unfinished almost a year ago. <P>

Lesson to be learned by all readers: never read (or comment) on a 'slice' of a story until it’s fully submitted in one installment or by chapters! <P>

BTW, I loved what you have written so far, but the abandonment of your readers is unforgivable.

Interesting plot. I have been waiting for the conclusion or at least the next chapter for a year. Since you posted a full story after this one there was no insurmontable barrier. If that was where you wanted to end the story. Say so and invite others to try their own denouements. I can see a story ending there in a book or even a magazine but here on the internet we get slightly more confused since some of the authors have other lives! If you are alive, please comment on the subject!

winners never quit losers never win

I have no idea what you were thinking when you wrote this story. Why would you leave your readers with one half of a story when it could have been a great story if you would have just finished it. I think you let your readers down or you just don't care about your readers.

why is this person not in jail you said he ran red lights and caused the accident.It terrible what happen to him but does that give him a free pass to put other people live in danger.There both not very bright people, i wouldn't want her for a lawyer or him taking care of my business.The author has some good ideas but needs someone to edit his stories he makes his main characters toholy then thou and when they fall it gets to silly.

why is this person not in jail you said he ran red lights and caused the accident.It terrible what happen to him but does that give him a free pass to put other people live in danger.There both not very bright people, i wouldn't want her for a lawyer or him taking care of my business.The author has some good ideas but needs someone to edit his stories he makes his main characters toholy then thou and when they fall it gets to silly.

why is this person not in jail you said he ran red lights and caused the accident.It terrible what happen to him but does that give him a free pass to put other people live in danger.There both not very bright people, i wouldn't want her for a lawyer or him taking care of my business.The author has some good ideas but needs someone to edit his stories he makes his main characters toholy then thou and when they fall it gets to silly.

Interesting srory. Are you going to finish it?

Very Good, but are you going to finish???

But it needs to be Finished. I mean you leave us where it can go anywhere and it goes NoWhere.

Curt

here was an interesting series written by a guy who is to lazy to finish the story. all 3 chapters were posted within 3 days of each other, the author must have either finished the 4th chapter or known that he couldn't finish the story. If it's finished post the god damn thing, if you can't finish it then why post any of it???

where is "the rest of the story?" aho .......

If you are going to abandon a story at least have the courtesy to delete it so we don't waste our time with only a part of it. anon jerry

I hope you are dead or disabled. Those are the only reasons which would excuse you leaving your readers in the air

Not finishing a story is an insult to the readers. It's only fair to insult the author in return. Finish this or delete it asshole....

From the emotional comments from readers it sounds like you could be a writer.....but, for that, you'd have to finish a story. One-star rating.

i hope you finish this

Would be Nice. The story is very good but You left it Un-Finished.

it would be nice to finally get a read on everything that Happened and How Mike Handles everything.

Please finish the story you have built up a really good story but have jsut left us all hanging

It is an excellent story and compelling -

Finish it please!!

Steve

that they looked him up and did him in.

AND THE AUTHOR BAILED OUT IN 07. WILL SHE EVER RETURN SO THEIR FATE CAN BE LEARNED. TK U MLJ LV NV p/s with a thanks to the KINGSTON TRIOS, THE MTA

Apparently the author has left the building. It's been 4 years with no further installments. My guess is that he won't be returning.

It's a good story, or would have been.

A good example why this site should not allow any chapters to be posted until the whole story is submitted. This was suggested to this site, but as always "ignored". I read three chapters not realizing it was incomplete. My own fault for not reading the authors bio and checking the stories out. I should have learned from other stories, that where never finished. No need to comment on a incomplete story.

Will the next chapter of 'Trust' beat the Second Coming?

Another good story with no fucking ending. Thats actually worse than a bad story.

"Help" where is the dude that did this skid--------?

maby dead, or something. This storie need's closure.

Get the ball rolling people.

When will this story get an Ending.

When is the next installment due?

here I am reading this in dec 2012, 5 years later and this is where the story ends. I guess that the author must have had a relapse and starved herself to death.

Can't wait for Chapter 4

Even though this is unfinished, it was still worth the read. You can figure out that they reconcile. The next chapter was sure to be revenge on the previously unknown friend.

An unfinished tale. No chapter four. Who can we call to finish this tale? Hmmm...

the worst is a landslide, TK U MLJ LV NV

can,t form enuff words to finish a story. is the military bio also an unfinished lie,,was he even in the military,,maybe as a cook,,qtr master, pfc's aide maybe.

Come on part 4 please.

Written nearly 8 years ago and its still unfinished!

Why even write a story if you haven't got the words to finish the damn thing. it was looking like a pretty good story too. Thanks for being so incomplete. It makes me wonder if I want to read the other stories you have submitted.

Suddenly, there was a blackout, and the entire city went dark! Mike ran next door to the hotel he had seen Terrance at, kicked his door in and confronted him! "Why'd you do it, Terrance?" He asked.

"I loved you since you pulled me out of that burning tank, Mike!" Terrance replied. Mike karate-chopped him in the neck so hard that his head came off. Then he snuck home, just as the power came back on.

The end.

Of this series. I guess kelleyhocky just fell off the planet.

Perhaps kelleyhockey *was* terrence milton and Mike killed him before he could finish this series.

The idiot should have posted the entire series first...

Dumb Shit Author did not finish his story!

Getting tired of UNFINISHED stories..........

- Talk about irony! The backbone of your story is "TRUST" and you can't be trusted by those who've invested their time and interest to even finish the story. The editors of literotica should establish a practice that if stories are left unfinished for 3 years,the story and all of its existing chapters should be removed so readers don't waste their time!

- 2007 was when this 3rd chapter was submitted so 8+ years later it sure isn't likely that there will be an ending submitted! ~ So,be gone,all parts of this story,and YOU too kellyhockey! Banished to Bogeyland!

Where's the rest of the story?

She didn't trust him after seeing the photos ...He didn't trust her after the call. But Molly is the one who all the shit is on. In most of the stories on here when the guy gets photos there is never any thought that they may be photoshoped. It must have been written by a male.

It is also so obvious that Molly's words are written from a male perspective. In her letter she sounds guilty of adultery and doesn't deny having sex. In reality she would have admitted that nothing had happened - remember that she had heard the taped phone message. But I suppose that line would not have suited the male egos of the readers and author.

but in her profession Trust and Loyalty are way down on the list. TK U MLJ LV NV

Because it is an unfinished story. If possible, I would have subtracted 1* for every year it was unfinished do a total of a 9* loss, but I can't do that. Story started out good but there is nothing worse than leaving a story unfinished. Even a really bad story would get a better review.

NOT ANOTHER UNFINISHED STORY! Yep! It sucks when someone doesn't finish their story.😁

Please?

that this story is unfinished, whats sadder is that, the writer who could have possibly finished this story to every ones satisfaction, is no more.

In fond memory of FTDS. a great soul, & definitely an underestimated talent no longer of this world.

-from every anon who has had nothing but appreciation for your gifts.

.... WHORE and a DISGUSTING CHEAT .... END OF STORY!!!

Another good story that we wish had finished. Thank you for what you did write though.

another cocksucking WIMP posting dumb cuck SHIT.

Another story with no ending,they should not be published without one and after the length of time from when this was written deleted.

Where is chapter 4?If it is not imminent after all this time,this story should be removed so people don't waste time reading it.

No ending and it hasn't been touched in over 10 years.

I wish it had a conclusion.

I was.just getting in to this. I agree with removing dead stories.

Do what FTDS would have done. Someone here is creative enough to do it. This is an opportunity for someone to write the rest of a good story.

It's badly written anyway. Events are haphazard and disjointed. Even the author couldn't stand it any longer. A comic book is better.

They should be tagged as such and made available for other authors to add chapters or finish.

Some typos and such, but well told and interesting. I do wish it were finished, but I'll take it as it is and enjoy it. Good job.

Unfinished stories have no place on a site. Let them go for three years and if left unfinished remove them with the author being told

Automatic 1/5 because it is unfinished

such a good story so well done but.....just stopped.

Would be nice for another person(s) to pick up FTDS banner.

that is it? So I gave YOU a ONE......bill

Awful

0 stars for an unfinished story - 14 year ago now. This is just a 2 hit wonder and gone.

Great story but no end. There should be a way to denote an unfinished story. It is a waste of time reading an incomplete story.

Why doesn't literotica have a badge or something to denote an incomplete series? It is disgusting to read all the way through to get stuck on a bloody unfinished story!

With hatred,

I.W.

Where is the rest of it

This sucks. Where is the rat of the series. I agree with the previous comment, Literotica needs to denote an incomplete series. Just wasted a coupe of hours for nothing

This story was sufficiently stupid that I was relieved it had no ending

I agree with previous comments stating that incomplete stories need to be flagged...

Just as well that it’s not finished. It would have been a bullshit RAAC anyway!

FTDS

Well, just read this story again…ugh…where is the notation of an incomplete story…

That being said, what happened after 2007 to the author? Could have died…we’ll never know…

This story had promise and looked to be a good one so how about the “authors” out there finishing the story

There have been many good follow ups to other stories, so get to it !! LOL

Huh?

I asked a couple of authors. None responded to me. So maybe if we all ask one he might. I was thinking Saddletramp. So inundate his responses and maybe we can get a great ending

No follow-up? A damn shame.

That's it??

If your marriage comes under threat from a few photographs and you react like a child that has just had their favourite toy taken from them, then guess what? Your marriage isn't as strong as you thought it was and that trust you thought you had is pretty much non-existent. If anything it's a good wake-up call.

As for photographic and video "evidence", always assume they are fakes. Don't react until you can get them independently verified by a professional and for the love of fuck please talk to your damn partner and don't run away like a coward. Common sense really, but such a thing is often conveniently absent in so many stories.

If you died before penning the final chapter/s well and good, however if you left everyone hanging you've only proven my point "Why Do Pigeons Fly Upside Down Over England"???, because the whingers aren't worth pooping on!!!