All Comments on 'Trust Me Bro'

Can't wait for more of this hot story.....such a sexy start...

A poor start to a multi part story.

Give these college guys some body hair -- hair for their chests and pecs and abs, hair for the forearms and thighs -- a very sexy sight. It sound like they will have fun!

Please seek the help of an editor, it won’t cost a thing. This could have been a fabulous first chapter, however the grammar and punctuation were rather bad. I apologise if English isn’t your first language, or perhaps you just genuinely didn’t pick up on the mistakes. I just found myself unable to concentrate on the story due to the things I have already mentioned.

Great story that gets a rise out of the reader, but do get an editor to address grammatical errors! (to for too, and more . . . ). Can't wait for the next episode . . . .

Very hot. I like a longer chapter. Looking forward to more.

Great story but why did you stop when it was getting good?

I thought that this was a hot story that deserves at least one more chapter and I am surprised that you haven't added one by now. Please continue writing and don't let negative comments slow you down.