by sexypencilcase
..... oh my, how I want to hear more! You've set the scene beautifully (and my body has reacted as you'd expect) and now I want to know what happens next!
Wonderful tease, loved how they got to that point, very natural and credible. Incest isn't something many women write about so this was extra interesting.
Your writing is fantastic as always! I think the build up is amazing and you’ve written your characters very convincingly!
Where's the rest? Aside from a few misspelled words, very good story line. Now finish it please.
OH I can see this is going to get really interesting. Loving it so far keep going