All Comments on 'Try Before You Buy Ch. 02'

I loved it I hope there is more to come

I agree with anon this is terrible and is just not worth the time

I am eager to find out what your story is all about, how she becomes a slave, and why after 6 months is she ok with her situation. Apparently her new Master is somewhat skeptical or does he tie all his slaves down in the trunk like that. You may want to lengthen the next chapters so we can get a feel for the characters and the purpose of all of this... i have enjoyed the last two chapters and hope you post more.

No plot, no background, no character development -- a total waste of time. In a Noncon story I look for some type of personal exchange, rather than one continuous torture scene. This just has nothing. Horseman/6:8

Glad there was no boring plot. Some times you just want to read a good ass torturing story...

So good! Would love more