All Comments on 'Trying to Reclaim My Marriage'

Repeat, wish I could vote my five again. If you can’t tell this one is one of my favorites

Great writing. Story meh oh second pass

3/5

Nato_

Great story! Thanks for writing.

Sue lost respect for Steve and had regulated him to the role of "house husband" and "nanny" to her kids. Sue felt her career was more important than Steve or the lids and that they should take second place in her life. The only reason Sue pulled back from the divorce is because the senior partner liked Steve so well and bragged on Steve and his painting work in a company wide email and endorsed Steve's business by sponsoring a bike. Divorcing Steve would have given Sue a "black eye" and a loss of respect in the senior partners eyes. The senior partners expected their lawyers looking to make partner to be successful in the careers and personal lives. Failure in her marriage to Steve would have been a "mark" against her professional record and an impediment in advancing to partner in the firm. Sue had more to loose in a divorce than Steve. Steve was the obvious primary care giver for the children and most likely to gain custody. Sue made more than Steve and would be looking at alimony and child support. Karma's a bitch when it side's with the husband's way in a divorce.

Great read.

I think this is really good

One of your best

I like it! Great story line. Well done. Keep writing.

XYZ

You are a good writer. I enjoyed the first 60% very much, before losing interest, not even reading the last page.

Thank you, I gave it a 5. Wish I could of added a plus or two to it.

self centered bitch that no longer values her husband. he has NO value until the senior partner William sends out a company wide e-mail congratulating him for winning. All of a sudden, only because someone HIGHER up the food chain shows value in her husband, she does. screw the arrogant bitch.

Egotistical male bs.

Padding/filling your bra can’t change your bra band size, just the cup.

Tattoos never made anyone prettier or sexier. Just gratuitous graffiti. Unless of course, you're grooming your wife for slutdom.

Great story 5*

Jumps around slot.He is giving the kids their dinner after school,then next thing he is living in his shop and she is giving them dinner.He is living at the shop supposedly yet is in his mother's kitchen often.Why would the senior partner send an Email of Steve's work round the company.Also with Sue's attitude their is no way she would ever end up in the biker gear mentioned and the comment she would give up her job for him is nonsense.

Agreed on the tatoo thoughts by an earlier commentator. There are a few that are nice, but they belong on a wall, not on a person. Pure skin is beautiful!

Brilliant, very well done, ignore the asshole comments, my wife works in law and banking, when I met her in a pub, she was with a group nof colleagues, and I rolled bup on my bsa with buckhorn bars etc etc, hair half way down to my ass, leather jacket , the usual, three months later I bought her an engagement ring for xmas, we married, families weren't overjoyed, we are still married, forty years on it hasn't always been easy, but worth every single minute.

I found this tedious and a bit immature. .

I liked it. A lot. 5*

I liked it a lot! Great Story, Great Writing! Great looking Bike! Great looking wife, at the end! I loved the happy ending! Especially the pierced nipples! Thanks for the effort! #Buster2U

Also, checking other comments, LOL we have some very prejudiced Tattoo haters here. LOL, I used to be a biker and I find Tattooed Women a lot hotter, So There. If you don't like them, too bad for you. I had a wife that had a tattoo of a flower on one breast and a butterfly on the other. What a great "bar game" that was, and a great way to get to know other drinkers to play "land the butterfly on the flower" in high winds! Every guy in the bar wanted to squeeze her bare tits playing that game!

Also, checking other comments, LOL we have some very prejudiced Tattoo haters here. LOL, I used to be a biker and I find Tattooed Women a lot hotter, So There. If you don't like them, too bad for you. I had a wife that had a tattoo of a flower on one breast and a butterfly on the other. What a great "bar game" that was, and a great way to get to know other drinkers to play "land the butterfly on the flower" in high winds! Every guy in the bar wanted to squeeze her bare tits playing that game!

He is a pussywhipped bastard with his skank wife still riding all over him till the end

Steve's bitch mother and Sue's bastard father make a good match

Good story of two people with problems...

I must disagree with those cowards that write comments under the name Anonymous. I thought this was a great story on reconciliation. As for women with tattoos, I figure what the hell? My wife has nine tattoos and she is sexy as hell. Sure, she has a couple I don't care for but they are part of her and she still makes good money, don't think that because someone has tattoos they are a lowlife. I even know a CEO down in Connecticut who is covered in ink. He wears three piece suits to work but on weekends and vacations he wears tee shirts and jeans and you would not believe he is a CEO of an Investment Corporation.

In this story Sue's father was a dick and a horse's ass but I can see where his attitude gave the story more of a realistic twist. All told I enjoyed the story and gave it 5 stars.

Having read this story again, I must say I thoroughly enjoyed it. Seems to have improved with age.

5 stars all day long!

Great reading the story, again!

This story kicks fucking ass. Hubby has a Harley and I love being on the back of that beast. Ladies, if you haven't tried it, you best get on it.

You went way too far in establishing the wife as an absolutely narcissistic bitch with not one redeeming feature to successfully pull the reconciliation rabbit out of the hat. You want to write cuck stories,fine. Just do that without torturing the fabric of belief trying make the female character anymore a human being than she is already established to be.

Why this ending? She only wanted him back because her big boss thought her husband’s work was great. Again she was only thinking of her job not her husband or kids.

Writers ‘we the public’ don’t want reality, we are forced to live in it every day. Where a woman can repeatedly be unfaithful and be rewarded for it until the kids reach eighteen. We would like to see the fairy tale where the man comes out on top. At least every once in a while. I think I’m going to stick with’Romance’ stories, at least they have a chance of a happy ending. LM

Interesting comments in the last few days.

It seems like a lot of men aren't too fond of one or more of the women they've met and can't shake it. Too bad for them.

If they're so grumpy, it makes you wonder why they read Loving Wives stories?

Just sign me as 'happily married for nearly 40 years'. I can appreciate fiction and take it at face value.

Just as fine second time

there is more to this story though

This is one of my go to stories when nothing new catches my eye. Always a great read for me. Thanks.

I loved it, and gave it 5 stars. It's also on my short list of favorites. At least in this story the husband isn't cuckolded, except by a workaholic wife spending too much time actually working. That does happen every now and then, as the husband was practically living in his paint shop for a couple of months while they were separated.

I wish there was a part 2 to let us readers know that they got on better and continued to live a long and healthy life together. No, I don't expect her to get a "boob job", but at least she's willing to spice up their sex life and that's what counts. Sometimes I wish my wife would be willing to spice up our sex life like that too, but as time goes on, I've kind of given up hope of that happening. At least we do it often enough that I'm not complaining. :-)

In my case, it wasn't my father in law being the trouble maker, but rather my mother in law who was the pain in the ass, as she felt she was better than all of us, while cuckolding my father in law. I'll never forgive her for that, as he didn't deserve it. He's passed on now, and she just went late last year.

I agree with MountainMan1336 about women and tats. Some women look good with them. My daughter in law has them all over her body, and if she wants more she'll get more. Her mother nor my wife have any, but you don't hear either one complain either. We do know that when she's done some sort of accomplishment in her life, as she'll get a new tat. It's like a badge of honor to her, and a way to remember something. Everybody is different.

And yes, in the story Sue's father was a dick.

You write the same story every time: woman treats the man like shit, man takes it for awhile, then finally has enough and decides to walk away, then they reconcile in an improbable manner. Doesn't matter if she cheated, he cheated, she's a workaholic, he's a workaholic - they all end up reconciling in a ridiculous way. RAAC's are exhausting in their inanity. Would love an actual realistic story where people walk away and keep walking....

That was a great story. I gave it 5 stars. The only thing I would do different is to put it in that romance category instead of the loving wives category.

Great story , well done. my marriage to her daddy's little girl was not what her dad and mom wanted, especially when I rolled up on my BSA for our first date, this year we celebrate our 40 wedding anniversary.

@Anon "Why this ending? She only wanted him back because her big boss thought her husband’s work was great. Again she was only thinking of her job not her husband or kids."

Did you actually read the story, or is it a comprehension problem? She never really wanted to let him go, she just took him for granted and lost respect for him. That two people she respected - mum and boss - recognised the talent and worth of her husband was enough for her to reassess the situation and put her head back on straight.

I appreciate that it's difficult for people who have been cucked to get over their insecurities, anger and hatred but you're really going to have to try harder.

@anon why this ending? Because the author wrote it this way. You want a different ending, then write your own story. You can make the story how you want. I cannot believe the BS some people post. Read the story an accept that while you would do it differently, it is not your story. You have no right to question why the author wrote it this way and since they are not active most likely you will never get an answer. If you are trying to learn why they did it so you can grow as an author then thy the forums and ask why folks do things a given way. But do everyone a favor. Become a member so you have a set name. You will get more info that way as many people ignore anons.

GREAT…AGAIN!

NICE......!

NICE.......!

Once she started treating him the way she did was grounds for a divorce that is not what a loving wife would do she would do everything in her power to make him happy she would have been caring and compassionent which is what the term loving wife means. treating him like a slave the way she did only means she never loved him and he was a stupid fool for taking her back when he finally grew a pair of balls to leave her but it turned out the balls he had were just fake so when she starts treating him like a slave again and then starts cheating on him he will be getting exactly what he fucking deserves and she will do it again that is a guarantee no man would ever stand by and let that happen and no man would stay with the bitch if she Done that well at least no real man would the way I have seen some comments and stuff is full of fake as fucks who isn't a man and who doesn't deserved to be called a man

Didja ever pause and wonder about "What if such-n-such would happen" after the end of the story?

Imagine the Atlanta office commissioning an official car with Steve doing the art. They can show the car not only at car shows but also white-collar symposiums, meetings, etc. Sue could be the biker chick for the shows and Miss Business suit for the others. But to make things up front for everyone Sue would need to be featured in a cover story in a business periodical stating quite clearly that her junior partnership was earned using her education, brains, hard work and the support of her loving husband. Maybe they could include a photo with Bill and their kids!

Reread this and upped it to a 5 from a 4. I enjoyed rereading it, and that is a real test for a story.

That's one of better ones... nice job!

Well done and nicely crafted. Thanks

GREAT STORY!!! 👏👏👏

Congratulations!!

Sounds like someone got their panties in a twist when I wrote ‘why this ending’ and now they can’t figure out how to get the knot out. Just pull them off and put on your big girl (granny) panties and it’ll be alright. Still stand by what I said! LM

I enjoyed reading it, nice feel good vibes, even if Steve was a bit fragile. You could clearly see the fault lines in both their characters. Only shame is that Sue didn't cheat on him.

Good, every time I reread it :^)

Pas mal après une seconde lecture mais pourquoi la fin est si rapide et me paraît incomplète. Dommage.

A fun story. Five stars

JPB

Enjoyed it, both times that I read it!!

I'm not sure the kind of disrespect she showed him through out the story and then not not defending him against her father I don't think that can be forgiven I know I wouldn't forgive that

And I would take custody of the kids cause she's never home always a babysitter with them so she's already shown that her job is more important than her family so no judge would give her the kids she showed she's unfit

Good guy finally wins ...

Wish you were still writing on this site!

5

I liked the story. Gave it 4 stars. But wifey is never going to change. He might have re- established some control for now, but the pendulum will swing back her her direction eventually. After all, his wife filed a divorce on him, and was going to crush him with the help of her dad. Reason being? She needed to be in control. No, I don’t see this with a happy ending.

I really liked this story of a married couple who found the spark again ,5 stars

I liked the story. No cheating for a change, just a couple working things out together. 5 stars

No man in his right mind is going to jokingly call his wife by another woman's name, especially when they're trying to get their marriage back on track.

Disappointing

I never got why this woman is worth the effort.

5/5

One of my Literotica favourites

This story is best ,enjoyable satisfying

Best story I've read on here. Two people from different worlds falling in love and making a life together. Hit a bumpy patch but find a way to make it work. Beautiful. 5/5.

I liked it. Although it seemed a bit too short in total.

I really liked it and it's one of my favorites too. What I love most about it is how her mother got on her father in the kitchen and really ripped into him. Of course this was after the MC got his ripping into his father in law in front of both the wife and her mother leaving the wife just sitting there in shock.

It also was good that there was no cuckolding going on, other than her job keeping her busy all the time. I agree, he should have been able to take his son to his work, if it's just him and the kids being there. Why not? It'll save from having to get a sitter. Taking the son with him to the show was no big deal, as no real man would ever hurt a child. Like his friend who also attended said he was more concerned about the MC, and would have taken his son home had there been any trouble.

I do like how they made up at the end with her becoming a "biker babe" for the night.

Nothing like a boob job to say shez really sorry

Hey my wife has had 4 boob jobs so far, going in for another size increase in Feb. If your woman won't get 5 boob jobs for you, then you're not doing it right.

Just as good the second time

Sorry folks, not into plastic. Thanks Slirpuff.

somewhere east of Omaha

Fucking love it. God I love my bike

GREAT story! Thank you!

Great read. For once happy to read a loving wives story, that don't include the usual big porn star cocks, cheating slut wife, office affairs, etc etc, just two married couple with their problems

I have just reread this for the second time and enjoyed it all over again.

I thought I had commented previously, but couldn't find it, so maybe not.

Very light erotica, mostly a great story.

Sue was a bitch from the first time he met her, and hating on his painting job yet the stupid wimp married her to play house husband

Good story.

As someone else said it makes a change from the 12 inch dick with ever ending supply of cum,and 48DD tits. No slut, no office predator,

Pleasant surprise.

Looking back it appears I've red this story at least 4 times. It still shows how a marriage can fall apart if one person thinks they are better than the other or they have some misplaced priorities. Marriage is a partnership you work together to provide for the family. Your wife should be your best friend. Good story without all the plotting and BTB stuff she really screwed up when she put him down for taking care of the asshole at the party.

Good story, nice change that neither were cheating on each other. Differences happen in relationships and can create distance over time very easily. She was a workaholic and under appreciated what her husband was contributing to the marriage and hurt his pride and self esteem as a result. Took a crisis to wake her up. Husband was a bit of a jerk to her at times as well. The husbands in these stories always seem to go full on nuclear and they seem to always run and hide rather than taking the time to sort out the best way forward. He ignores the welfare of his kids and refuses to talk when this is the classic save able marriage with counseling or at least good communication around their differences.

Sue was kind of a bitch, but I think she just lost her way and wasn't actually a bad woman. She let her success go to her head, and was mislead by a shitty father. But the fact that she didn't cheat, and was willing to try to change shows she's fundamentally a good woman.

Why would the primary caretaker not get primary custody? Your logic is shit.

Furthermore a divorce would of been much better with him finding someone actually deserving of him not a stuck up bitch.

If you have a rigid frame you don’t need a weld on hardtail. BUT I do love pan lowers and shovel uppers. Mine had a 20 over Harmon front end. Love that to this day 45 years later.

The amount of disrespect shown in this story would not only end a marriage it would destroy any chance at reconciliation in reality if my parents were to disrespect my husband like this wife's father did I would Said something to him about it for nobody is allowed to disrespect my husband regardless of who you are cause besides my kids No one is more important to me than my husband my parents are important to me but not more than my husband and that's the way it should be which is why in life the kind of disrespect shown in this story will always completely destroy a marriage with no chance of reconciliation

LadyLore

To anonymous that posted 10 days ago actually the writer is correct on the divorce aspect when it comes to custody of the kids the law will more than likely award custody to the mother unless she is proven to be a unfit mother and in the laws eyes they wouldn't have deemed the wife in this story unfit she would have actually gotten custody without much problem as she made more money than the husband she would have had an easier time at supporting them and herself then the husband would have had so it's not the logic of the writer that is shit on that situation it's the logic of the law that's shit

LadyLore

Very imaginative and well-written story. The characters were well developed and the arc of the story was logical and quite realistic. I did not sweat the legal or other details that bothered other readers. It was just a very good story in my opinion.

Just another average Beta male, Alpha female story. Yawwnnn.

@Anonymaous/LadyLore - You are incorrect mam. Child custody goes to the parent who is the primary caregiver - which means they spend the most time taking care of the children, organizing doctors appointments, picking them up/dropping them off to daycare, etc. Typically this IS the mother, but the courts are not allowed to show discrimination in this regard and indeed, in the case of this story primary custody and the family residence would go to the father. The fact that the wife makes more money being a deciding factor is stupid, because once again - in no fault divorce, the spouse that makes more money has to pay alimony/maintenance to the spouse who doesn't.

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Look, I get that a lot of LW stories have some sort of ignorant 1960s view of how family court works, but to be blunt - each state has guidelines on how to decide custody, child support and maintenance/alimony and they're all written in gender neutral terms. Hell, maintenance is literally just a mathematical formula pro-rated by length of marriage and is decided practically automatically by the court.

Child custody in a divorce PRESUMES custody to the mother. But, this is a rebuttable presumption. Evidence that father took the kids to school, attended school meetings, went to MD appointments and that Mother worked 60+ hours a week outside the home would overcome that presumption in Massachusetts.

5+ stars. I don't look for gammer or punctuation It was a great writing. Thank you, you where able to find a real life formula and bring it to your pages to. Good work.

Still is an excellent story

Enjoyed the reread as much as I enjoyed it the first time

BardnotBard

Why? Why would the MC desire to 'reclaim the marriage? Once bitten forever shy. Move on, hire a hooker on occasion.

If I were the MC, I'd prefer to hang out with the bikers instead of the bitch.