- Romance
- T's BH Lounge
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"Taking me on the piano bench yesterday would have been rushing things. Any time after that I'd have said yes. May I use your shower?"
"Catie, you don't need to ask. I want you to feel at home."
"I do. Wanna wash my back?"
"I'm not trustworthy."
"Tony, you were never trustworthy," she said, leading him upstairs.
In their three years together, they had made love hundreds of times. To both, this felt like it would be their first.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 1 year agoA disappointing story. Too much airy fairy touchy feeely mind gamey bullshit for me. Each to their own.
Anonymousabout 1 year agoLOL, too much "we're all connected, dude!" Cheech and Chong nonsense. And they end up back together after she _had_ to go on a date with someone else? And to disappear that completely in one night beggars belief. Just not a good story.
Anonymousover 1 year agoAlthough I feel the ending was a bit abrupt, i give this story a 5 star rating; a warm romance story.
G
Anonymousover 1 year agoI love your stories overall, this one not so much. I am not understanding how he was at fault. After 3 years of dating, SHE needed to go out on a date with someone else? Who wouldn't leave her? Was he supposed to be a cuck? He wasn't a coward, that is just good sense to get out and away from the self entitled bitch. Also, after meeting up years later, why did he have to sell himself to her? Again, SHE had to go on a date with someone else. Totally her fault, she should have to sell herself to T not the other way around. I guess the grass isn't always greener. Her loss.
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoI found it strange that T wrapped his entire life around Catie. He quit medical school and walked away from his life because she went on a date with another guy. Then he rebuilt his life by singing love songs about her and never tried to find anyone else. If they lived together and were so close for three years, it seems odd that he never met her sister in all that time.
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoVery cute and extremely predictable. Some section raise pollen in the air, which has an impact on our vision! Catie looks eminently unpredictable and not a heavy weight in spite of her painful past. Maybe she deserves both her own pain as well as T's?
I loved the Reiki story and the oneness derived from the drumming. I've seen a segment on the net where about 500 drummers were located in one large room and they were all drumming the same rhythm and you could not help but hear only ONE drum.
A reluctant 5*
BJ
Overcriticalover 2 years agoSince I wasn't allowed to rate this because it was already rated, I assume I read this before and thought it was worth a 4* grade but not worth commenting on. It wasn't bad, but I have to live up to my handle and make a comment or two. I really wish authors would stop using similar names for key players. Carla and Catie both start with a "Ca" and when you read a few stories at a time it's hard to follow. This story has all sorts of useless detail, like the location of the bathroom between two bedroom's. And the mumbo-jumbo of the cult stuff. Does nothing for the story. It's painfully obvious from the beginning that "T" stands for Tony and for someone who spent three years living with a guy and is painfully lost without him for her not to recognize him sounds weird to say the least. As a final comment have to say that most "detail men" (i.e., those salesmen/saleswomen) who push pharmaceuticals to doctors are really obnoxious, aggressive creatures who are probably quite different in their 30's from what they were 10 years earlier. Catie couldn't possible be unchanged and Tony would be well advised to sample before he dines. Today it's only worth a 3* grade.
