by SomeOriginalFun
Well at least it appears to be consensual? It’s really not my kind of thing at all, being honest it made feel kind of sick reading it. Then there was the scene pause, that did help a little but still it’s really hard to take it at face value.
That’s probably a *me* issue and not anything wrong with your story, I’m submissive/ switch with appalling self esteem. It seems to be a common attitude amongst submissives. So I’m still undecided on the story. From my perspective this is asnap shot for a relationship and there isn’t enough information to make a real judgment.
Best of luck with your writing
Tess (uk)
loved this! loved the cruelty but loved even more the way he took a step back to check in with his sub and reassure her. so important. really hope to read more of tubby’s adventures!