All Comments on 'Turn Around, Look at Me Ch. 06'

by YDB95

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Can't wait for the next one!!

blackwatereagleblackwatereagleover 11 years ago
Nice

This was nicely done with touches of humor and love and sharing with good friends. I assume there will be at least one more chapter.

fanfarefanfareover 9 years ago
admiration

YDB95, what I admire about your writing skills is how you develop your adult characters to act and talk like adults. And how throughout this storyline you have maintained a sense of humor.

Thinking about it, considering other stories in the Romantic genre (no matter the actual slot used). It is the writers who can do humor, who produce my favorite stories.

As the saying goes 'Comedy is hard!" and that you make it both erotic and romantic is the trifecta of literature.

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