All Comments on 'Turn the Key'

I felt like I was in the scene as it progressed. I love your ability to use all the senses so the reader can be immersed in the situation and sensuality.

Can’t wait to read your next story Sunny!!!

Your ability to draw the reader into the story is fantastic, and I really enjoyed this piece. Looking forward to seeing more from you!

Of classic D/s with hypnodom techniques. As another commenter said, you have built this world and drawn us into it. It is rich, and textured, and wonderful. Please continue writing, whether this or other work. You are quite talented,

I just love your descriptions and the depth you put into your writing. Please keep it up!!!

I REALLY, really wanted to read this, the concept sounded incredible. I sincerely hope that my imminent comment is not taken as being offensive because I guarantee you that I’m not trying to be offensive, I just can’t read DD:LG for me it’s too close to incest stories.

I KNOW 100% that it’s not the same thing, but having been a victim of childhood sexual abuse I’m not able to separate those two things despite my logical brain insisting there is a big difference.

Best of luck with your writing

Tess (UK)