All Comments on 'Turning the Page Ch. 01'

I hope Bennet gets all the money back from any deposits he may have made toward the wedding after he finds he had asked a whore to marry him.

Excellent story, well written all around, and hot! Love the descriptions of all the women’s orgasms, too 😊

Excellent first effort. I'll be watching for part 2.

Interesting - the writing is vivid but doesn't feel like anyone is doing anything wrong. Missing that buzz. It's "just" sex on a date.

Also halfway through page 2 : "Travis reached out and grasped Nikki's hips," should be Ashley

Don't get me wrong, I love sluts. Not a fan of cheating sluts. This whore jumped from engaged, to lieing, to spank in one night out without so much as a second thought.

What a slut. No doubt she doesn't 'recant' after betraying the man she's supposed to be marrying.