All Comments on 'Turnons - A Game of Dares Ch. 01'

Glad to see you back and I'm looking forward to reading the whole story 😀

Awesome. Love that you are back.

I remember your original story. What a great concept turnons is. I wish it was a real app.. Loved the original, very well written. It would be a shame to not continue. Have you thought about mabye 2 main characters? The other being a male with females giving dares. Id love to see that incorporated or even a seperate story. Keep up the good work. Dont listen to the haters, they need to get a life. Thank you

It is a pleasure to see you back! It is a good thing to allow creativity to triumph over apprehension. Perhaps those that would pester you have learned that you cannot whip a person into writing a great story. Take your time and write this at the pace that satisfies you. Your desire to see the story play out is a very healthy approach.

Nice start- look forward to seeing what comes next. (or reading in this case)

Read ur stories before there great glad u decided to post again thanks

Such a sexy concept, loved reading this

Welcome back !

You're back! Awesome! I've been waiting for your stories to continue!

Thank you so much for comming back! I loved the story and checked on it regularly for updates and was sad to find it gone at some point. The concept and story have been absolutely great. It is sad that people feel entitled to bother you with angry mails whatever their intent may be. I always hope it is due to high engagement in the story and dissapointment when the writer chooses a different path than their envisioned one - because than their hatemail ultimately is a twisted complement.

In any case I am eager to see how you let the story evolve and what small tweaks and changes you made.

Very well written and an intriguing start ... hope there is more ...

I'm glad you came back. Ignore this assholes who threaten and make demands. They're sad lonely losers anyway.

Thanks everyone for the support, and thank you both to newcomers and old readers. Chapter 2 has already been submitted so it should be up any day now. Hope you'll like it.

Welcome back and thank you for coming back. I'll admit to being a little crestfallen when you pulled your stories. I've been checking every few weeks in hopes that you would bring this series back or start a new series. It sucks when he negative people in the world crush creativity. Feel confident that they tear things down because they do not have the talent to create anything themselves. I'm looking forward to seeing how the story turns out.

Whoa, this looks exactly like my kind of thing, and there are 2 more parts already. I'll dive into it right now.

Like, I think, many others, I have been checking semi-regularly to see if your story would reappear here, and it is outstanding to discover that it has. You have a unique voice among writers on literotica, and your story inspired (and now, re-edited, inspires anew) the sweetest impatience to find out what's going to happen next. What a delight to find your voice and your story back here again.

I am picky about what I like to read, and your story hits the spot perfectly! ;)

Looking forward to reading more about Alex.

Fun, and exciting.

I’m very happy you resumed writing your story. It’s one of my favourite and the setting is somehow familiar with me. I’ve been writing a few in the past and I know how difficult can be to keep going and how pushing can be readers. That’s the reason why I very seldom post comments. I just want to express my support with this one.

Getting started very smoothly on a terrain I very much like.. :-)

Though I am already panicking, thar every part has only one single page...and there are not enoigh parts at all! I hope, you keep on writing....if you're taking the right - not tooooo quickl - pace. There shall be a hell of potential for a great reading time!!!! :-)

I remember that story.

Back then it seemed to be the usual downwardspiral story ends in utter misery or never ends.

I´ll give it another shot but I still firmly believe that life´s too short for depressing smut.

Just discovered this. Nice start. Fun, too. I’ll be reading further…

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i loved it - a tad different from what is normal (for this site) - took more time with her personality than her physical attributes - hope the rest of the stories are done as well

Female here i wish there was a app like this irl

Very sexy story, looking forward to reading more chapters

This is my favorite story on this whole site, at the moment at least. I was very sad when it disappeared. Author: brilliant, don't let the trolls get you down again.

A lovely beginning!

This is a good story and well written but it just stops at chapter 16. Just when you think there will be a conclusion. The sudden stop is a huge let down.