All Comments on 'Tutoring Ch. 01: Engaging the Student'

Looking fwd to another chapter

Excellent start! Now on to lesson 1!

A really good start! I have a simple system for feedback: 3 stars for giving me hard on, 4 for making me want to masturbate, 5 for making me actually cum! Five ⭐️ s for this one.

Lovely premise.

Better if she'd not been such a 'fast learner", and had needed direction/instruction to get his pants open, his cock out, and understand what to do to/with his cock and balls.

More of the visual needed. How did she think his cock and balls looked? Did looking at them excite her? Did playing with them excite him? Did his excitement further excite him?

Needed more details.

Needed even more dialog.

Four stars.

Thanks for the feedback! It is very much appreciated. I will try to more descriptive and incorporate more dialogue in future chapters.

Nice premise.

Nicely told.

Five stars.