All Comments on 'Tutoring - How Hard Can It Be? Ch. 01'

by DanCastle

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MaonaighMaonaighover 2 years ago

Nicely written and potentially a lot of fun. I'm looking forward to the next chapter to see where you are going with this.

One small point: when Maria started her career as an extortionist, you wrote that she was after "an exuberant amount of money". I think perhaps you meant "exorbitant". Check the difference in your dictionary.

veeblefetzerr12veeblefetzerr12over 2 years ago

I wish I was there instead of reading about it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Gripping!!!

Loving the setting and the pace of the story, also damn! both characters are hot! I am already in love with Maria.. Can’t wait for the next chapter! x

MigbirdMigbirdover 2 years ago

Erotically intriguing storyline with intriguing protagonist (the tutor); not to say Annie isn’t a curious character. Definitely interested in seeing where you take us.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I like the story, lesbian is not really my cup of tea but I enjoyed this one hope you continue the story!

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