by DanCastle
Nicely written and potentially a lot of fun. I'm looking forward to the next chapter to see where you are going with this.
One small point: when Maria started her career as an extortionist, you wrote that she was after "an exuberant amount of money". I think perhaps you meant "exorbitant". Check the difference in your dictionary.
Gripping!!!
Loving the setting and the pace of the story, also damn! both characters are hot! I am already in love with Maria.. Can’t wait for the next chapter! x
Erotically intriguing storyline with intriguing protagonist (the tutor); not to say Annie isn’t a curious character. Definitely interested in seeing where you take us.
I like the story, lesbian is not really my cup of tea but I enjoyed this one hope you continue the story!