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LenardSpencer almost 4 years ago

Please read back over your work (edit).

You constantly got the names of Lily and Katie mixed up and used them incorrectly. Simple editing would have fixed that. Cheers.

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A man seeking his other better half. In the meantime, enjoying fantasising and dreaming of a female body. Passionate writer of own personal fantasies. Three long series already published on Literotica: "Entering the blonde dream", "Twelve Hours" and "Power Play". The last of t...

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