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Boyd PercyBoyd Percyabout 4 years ago

In death as in life, they were together.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
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Not sure I understand the point the story. Lot's of detail and activity, with no real destination.

GumpershnickalGumpershnickalalmost 2 years ago

The Guy giving the speech has about the storytelling skill I would expect of someone who nicknamed twins kizzy and kissy

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Thank you for constructive comments. I'm working on editing some of my existing stories and then adding some new ones I've been working on. "Spring of 45" is the first edit I've submitted. If that works I have some others in mind.