All Comments on 'Twins Compete for Everything'

Yuck author... delinquent story... pathetic fantasy

Winner gets to sit on the loser's face. In front of the husband. Loser has to seduce the hot religious redhead next door to fuck them all four. Great story. Five stars.

This was funnier than hell and I loved the escalation but if these twins are that hot and parading around in those outfits and stripping down to thongs I doubt any guy could not help but get a hardon.

They're both a couple of manipulative bitches. Neither of them love their husbands, if they did, they wouldn't be cutting them off in the bedroom for a month at a time.

The story was ok. The guys had fun but they were probably desperate. They didn't have sex for a month and now the girls are going to cut them off for another month? By the end of two weeks, I would be pissed...

Looking forward to next month

So to be clear both of the whores cut their cucks off of sex for a month so they would be cool once the wives decided to ease them into the cuck phase as they start fucking other men?

Funny, but they are too seriously fucked up, mean wives who really dont give a shit about their husbands.

Two useless twats like that can ruin an otherwise decent story. And it did.

Became completely engrossed in the story and laughed out loud so much my wife insisted on knowing what I was reading. Just a really fun, flowing and thoroughly enjoyable (cheeky) story. Deserves a 4+ rating

Juvenile, and pathetic. The relationship between these two women is dysfunctional and damaging. The penalty for the loser is always some act or symbol of denigration and disrespect. Can you imagine how fucked up some of their competitions might get. And God Help their children when they get drawn into the competition. So far it involves only their husbands. What happens when some hot sexy neighbor or work associate comes into their lives and the two whores decide to bet who can seduce him first?

Lots of opportunities for an obnoxious and marriage killing sequel.

Thanks for the effort.

next part must be there

Fun banter, but the sisters are selfish bitches who don’t really care about their husbands.

So many comments taking this story seriously, when it was so obviously not meant to be.

Who will get the first divorce or who will serve as Maid of Honor at the double divorce?

What fucking garbage. Amazing some actually thought this was a good story. Unbelievable. One Star.

Seriously, not a story I enjoyed at all.

It was terrible

somehow under average story but not garbage

Public Mound?

Please! If you insist on writing these silly stories, it's a pubic mound. I've seen some old burial mounds that were open to the public. If it's a "public mound" shouldn't it be down by the courthouse or in a park? Just asking for a friend.

Totally unrealistic, but very enjoyable to read. Cut their husbands off for a month was probably a regrettable narrative choice as the two female characters completely lose of credibility and likability. Still, I am glad I read this post

Competitive sisters , where do I find one ? Or two ? Fun and comical little tidbit of over-the-top literature . I’m gonna give you a 5 for it !

It grew on me