All Comments on 'Twins in Love Ch. 03'

Hope the story continues!

This is George Washington Ariola (pseudonym, obviously). The story will definitely continue. They'll explore further, find out what each other likes. (There'll probably be some fetishes that some people might not like, but they're what I like, so hopefully other people will too.) They'll grow closer. I'll also probably write some quick stories that just concentrate on sexual stuff without much plot development. Think of them as mini episodes. But then there'll be official full chapters with more plot as well.

I'm just currently working on another story series right now, so it could be weeks before the next one. The new story is very different (if you couldn't tell by my first story that I write about a whole bunch of different topics). All I can say is that it's about a college girl who starts showing her wild side after a breakup. Hope y'all'll read that one too. I also have some ideas for some one-offs.

But never fear, Jamie and Jenny WILL return!!!

Nice start. I am looking forward to reading more about Jamie and Jenny.

Thank you for writing and sharing the love :)

Omg absolutely fucking wonderful. Cunt lapping sex maniac Lanc’s UK.

Wish there was more to the story. It’s so good.

First 2 parts were not nice. Very negative, very porny. Only in this last part does the sex, and the emotion, really take off. So I'm glad I stuck it out.

I agree with the previous post. This chapter was very well done. Erotic, but very emotional. There's a sweetness to it that is sorely lacking in parts one and two. Part one was absolutely ridiculous and part two was just plain gross. You've hit the sweet spot here. Please move forward in this manner. Great job.