Twins Score Ch. 05

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"Honey," John said, with desperation in his voice.

Shirley instantly understood his predicament. She had been stroking his cock as they watched Naomi, inadvertently pushing him a little too far. "Naomi," she shouted, "can you handle one more?"

Naomi lifted her head and gave John a toothy grin.

He hopped up on the table and stood over her just as his cock erupted, spewing cum towards Naomi.

She opened wide and bobbed her head to catch his first rope of cum. She reached out with both hands and took over, jacking every last drop of his load into her waiting mouth.

"Damn, Mom," Justin said, "that was so fucking hot. But, I thought Dad was saving himself for... you know."

Shirley slipped out of the room to replenish the snack tray. Once out of earshot of the bikers, she said, "Yeah, guess I got a little carried away."

Justin chuckled. "Maybe, but I think Naomi had a lot to do with it."

"Yeah," Shirley said, "she's one hot firecracker."

"Are you guys done for today?" Maggie asked.

Shirley pondered the question. In days past, the guys were good for several rounds. However, age had taken its toll. "I'm not sure about the regulars, but I'll bet the biker twins are up for it."

"How about you?"

Shirley took a deep breath. After watching Naomi's performance she was as horny as ever. "I'm thinking about it."

Maggie glanced to Isletta. "Maybe we could come down and make good on your promise to John... while you go another round with the biker twins."

Isletta giggled, but didn't say anything.

Shirley replied, "I like the way you think... not to mention John would get the thrill of his life. But what about my boys, what do we do with them?"

Justin chimed in. "Naomi?"

"Why did I know you'd suggest that?" Shirley said.

"Can you make it happen?" Justin asked, hopefully.

"I can," Shirley said, "sit tight while I figure out how."

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kwalankwalan6 months ago

4 stars. It started out great, then you introduce the 6 bikers and Naomi and this changes the original story plot.

Nothing happens with Dad, Mom, the twins and girlfriend. Lousy ending. I think it would be best to delete this and rewrite the chapter. Otherwise the story was great. Great plots and twist with the twins, mom and girlfriend.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Absolutely fabulous, cunt, cunt and still more cunt. What would I not give to get into an org like this, eating and fucking cunt till I pass out from the insane pleasure. Stating over as soon as I recover. Cunt crazed fucker, Lancashire, UK.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Sorry, but you lost me. The story feels like a runaway train and is so far away from where it started i doubt it's ever going back. Which is too bad cuz I was hoping there would be more interactions between the twins and cheerleaders that were teased in the first chapter. You did a wonderful job of developing the individual characters in the early chapters, but now it feels like all these random people were haphazardly thrown in at the last minute which makes them feel like fluff and unimportant.

It would have been nice if the twins still had room to grow in their relationships and sexual escapades, but they've become so "experienced" and over the top sexually that there is nothing new for them to try or developed characters with which to interact. Everyone in the story seems to be in on the "twin switch" which is disappointing; it would be fun to still have that tension in the story line. The story has kinda devolved into an all out sexual romp, and that's great if that's your thing, I'm just wishing that the eroticism of the first 3 chapters was still alive and well.

Keep writing. I can tell you spend a lot of time on it. I'm following so I'll keep reading!

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