All Comments on 'Twist'

I applaud your creativity, both in this and your previous story. Very original. The other one was superior, though.

For some reason, I read some of these same stories, and they get predicable and staid. I would prefer if more of these types of stories ended in different ways. Also, who lives like this full time? As the mistress in the last story said, "Get a life," people.

I too despise how predictable some of these stories have gotten. You did a wonderful job. Keep it up!!

Or entertaining? Or interesting? It failed on every level.

Like you, I'm sick of the same old tired endings. The inspired, ironic twists in your endings are what I would love to see more of. BRAVO Seurat, BRAVO. I can only hope that more writers will follow in your footsteps and give us more satisfying, ironic and truly twisted endings. Remember: "Time Wounds All Heels!"

stuff on here. Hardly anyone really wants to live 24/7 as a dom or sub, it's only fun to play occasionally.

It's always better to read a story when you don't know where it is going.

hilarious and pointed!