by Seurat
It's always better to read a story when you don't know where it is going.
stuff on here. Hardly anyone really wants to live 24/7 as a dom or sub, it's only fun to play occasionally.
Like you, I'm sick of the same old tired endings. The inspired, ironic twists in your endings are what I would love to see more of. BRAVO Seurat, BRAVO. I can only hope that more writers will follow in your footsteps and give us more satisfying, ironic and truly twisted endings. Remember: "Time Wounds All Heels!"
Or entertaining? Or interesting? It failed on every level.
I too despise how predictable some of these stories have gotten. You did a wonderful job. Keep it up!!
For some reason, I read some of these same stories, and they get predicable and staid. I would prefer if more of these types of stories ended in different ways. Also, who lives like this full time? As the mistress in the last story said, "Get a life," people.
I applaud your creativity, both in this and your previous story. Very original. The other one was superior, though.