All Comments on 'Two Broken Roads Ch. 02'

Can't wait for chapter 3. Laura and Ben are so sweet together!

Fantastic chapter, Barry. You have an amazing understanding of the human mind.

Great story but a little too sugary and the religious aspect?... Well, syrupy! Puts God off a bit... She gets something like toothache!

But, looking forward to Ch.3

4*

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Wow...lots of rainbows and unicorns in this chapter...still s 5 for the writing

Till that fool said yawn inducing.

Seriously?

You just described heaven on earth!

It takes a truly good woman, and in this case,

A great woman with 2 wonderful daughters to bring out the best in the man.

Cheers and thanks.

***** This is some good storytelling. Good piece of writing. Thanks for sharing.

Nice to see some actual being good/doing good Christianity here, especially since the Christian Loudmouths take a fair amount of well-earned abuse in LW.

Very nice well written story, I'm really enjoying this one

Love the story . AAAA++++

Very good

Looks like Ben might replace the whore with a real woman; teacher, mother and possibly wife and mother to the new babies!

This story is just getting better as I read into it. Ben, I believe in this storyline has just hit the proverbial happiness jackpot. 5 stars

What I hate about this story is I can't seem to rate it higher than a 5. Thank you!

Very cute and wholesome chapter

Outstanding chapter - great writing and wholesome story - though afraid of what the next chapter may bring.

The brother in law of the bigamist walks if I’m on the jury. Not sure if it was smart but it was honest and deserved.

I give up

Too much god squad

A little too saccharin for me.

More Hallmark than I can take. It's just too much. I wish you well.

Well, I had Ben and Laura married and living happily ever after at the start of this chapter. It just felt right and looks like it will come true unless the author throws in some awful twisted events. I'm even betting there will be another set of little feet pitter pattering around by the end of the next chapter. Guess I'm just a sentimental ol guy after all.