All Comments on 'Two Families: Road to Incest Pt. 03'

Actually this is very exciting. Although it needs work on spacing and more pharagraps to separate who was talking to whom. And also maybe a reminder at the beginning of the story about the characters who is related to whom since its been a while since the last chapter was posted.

However, the contents of the story is somewhat unique and really very exciting. Please don't let us wait too long for the next chapter.

I agree with your comments on confusion, that comes sometimes when working in a collaboration. Time between chapters, well sorry about that but I am not a full time writer, and have other things to do. Also i work on other stories as well.

There will be one more chapter to round things out.

I enjoy reading your stories and hope that you will continue giving us more family incest - swingers stories. Hopefully, Pt.4 will include Miss. Maitland, Scott’s teacher, and some other swinger friends of the two families. How about a Third family? Keep the stories fun and add surprises!

DNA

Yes, Miss Maitland. That would be a good addition to the continuation of this chapter. Specially that she is a teacher of Scott. She could be a gorgeous young lady who is demure but adventurous.

Never ever change from narrative to perspective in the middle of a story, it is jarring to the reader.