All Comments on 'Two Families: Road to Incest Pt. 04'

As usual, great story Nikkie. Very exciting family loving while on vacation. It would be nice to know how their reactions would be when they’re back in school. Specially Caitlyn, maybe blushing when she see Miss Maitland looking at her with a knowing

smile as she’s giving lectures in the classroom.

Damn! What a fucking hot story series. Nikkie you are a sexually hot lady. Love to know more about you. Your story made me get extremely aroused and hard.

I really liked the first two parts. An imaginative, well-written, logical story flow and very pleasantly pornographic.

However, from the fourth part of the story, it's like a bumpy road. I’m not a prude, but it would have been better to skip the incest line.

Feel that the author is also looking for reasons that are not present. Two couples having crazy good sex with each other, why start with their own kids? The motive is disbelieving.

The two husbands added nothing to the story. Except for a word or two, they are just sex-scenery.

Wow! Extremely well done!!! All parts 5***** and would have geven 10 if it were possible.

Story - TOP

Writing style - Top

Characters - Very, very good.

Location - good but not so important which is also a plus.

What is still missing? The NEXT PARTS...

REGARDS M

I don't feel enough time was spent expending on the relationships before introducing a third party to the mix.

i wish there was another chapter when Caitlyn and Scotty got back home and went to school mmmmm maybe a 3some between Miss Maitland and the 2 kids mmmmmm

A great chapter, Nikki. Full of love, tenderness and hot rampant sex between all three couples and Miss M.

It would be interesting to know what happened when the holiday was over and whether any dalliances took place between any of them, esp with Miss M

Wow! That was easily one of the best incest stories on this site. Very well done.

D&A