All Comments on 'Two Hundred Dollars Ch. 14'

I love this story. Their confusion, their exploration, everything about these goofy characters is terrific. Thank you

I couldn't be more pleased with the pace and sexual tension you've developed between the characters! Very creative, plausible, and erotic. I have thoroughly enjoyed it so far! Thank you for your efforts.

Thanks for writing.

I loved part 14, each and every paragraph of it. Wonderful girls scene, and wonderful "threesome" in his room.

And I love it how the girls value their friendship.

But then the cliffhanger? A bold Laura is raising the bar? And they still have to go for the last 2$. Do you hear me crying? I hate cliffhangers! Come on, do you know how it tears me apart?

Hurry! Chapter 15 is urgent!

I'm not a fan of spanking stories and yet I've read, and enjoyed, every chapter and can't wait for the next one to arrive.

Great story and story writing

You shouldn't have to wait much longer.

Although I should warn you, the next chapter does a bit of a flashback/re-hash before it continues.

Cheers,

@XavierTorch

I am ready to find out what the cliffhanger is.

"Although I should warn you, the next chapter does a bit of a flashback/re-hash before it continues"

That makes chapter 16 another "urgent" :P